Sunday, October 19, 2008

Never ending



Just a drop falling
Ripple in reality.
Years coming around.



16 comments:

anthonynorth said...

The sense of continuance in this is subtle, but so true.

SandyCarlson said...

Anthony expresses my thoughts, too. The last poem about the never ending mystery of causality--how and why small things can cause such big ones--is subtle thunder. Thanks.

Anonymous said...

I like how each part can be read as an individual or as a whole

Anonymous said...

Very lovely progression, love 'ripple in reality'...

Beth P. said...

Oh Nathalie!

These are splendid. I do love your subtlety.

The slight browning on the peonie (think it's a peonie?)...speaks volumes.

Many thanks--

Anonymous said...

I love the notion that time becomes fluid, drops of time rippling. Lovely.

Anonymous said...

I like your salute to chaos theory. Interesting artwork and poems.

Anonymous said...

You really touched the definition of never ending so subtly.

Edward S Gault said...

I reaaly liked Seasons ripple!-nice.
Thank you for sharing this.

DeLi said...

pure white blooms so lovely!

Nancy Bea Miller said...

Wow, great!

Anonymous said...

I like what you did with this prompt. So true, in both cases.

Tumblewords: said...

Love these - infinity in few words!

qualcosa di bello said...

i like the gentle feel of your words...

Anonymous said...

..'just a slight tremor/which cannot be stopped'_play on 'undercurrents'-yet-"subtle thunder'~many thanks..

Jim said...

Hi Nathalie, this is so nice. I read them together, they fit so well.
Thank you for coming to my little poem and for your encouragement.
I am sorry that I am so late in returning, I am just plain snowed under. I may never catch up.
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