You have linked the hard and the soft throughout your haiku. I like this. I like maelstrom/brick. I like hay/fading. I like yesterday/century. If we take the time span you claim I can well see the link between brick and hay.
First of all it's a great photo for the prompt; a thousand words couldn't describe it better. 2nd, my brain did a total shift with cavorting like hay. Super.
What an interesting juxtaposition of words/thoughts/ideas. Walls cavorting alone stopped me and made me think... then "like hay..." Hmmm. Very cool poem.
Like so many of the others, I was struck with the analogy between brick walls and hay cavorting.
Hay at play sways and leans in several directions, but usually has one preferred way (in my observations). I'm wondering if bricks have the same prediliction? And once they crumble, toward or away from each other, then what is the game?
I think it's the timelessness of the poem that strikes me. The endless play of matter on matter...
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You have linked the hard and the soft throughout your haiku. I like this. I like maelstrom/brick. I like hay/fading. I like yesterday/century. If we take the time span you claim I can well see the link between brick and hay.
Intelligent response to the prompt...
The image is truly one of defenses down. May we all experience hard walls cavorting like hay--perhaps returning to a natural state.
I love this idea, and that is just my kind of photo.
Incredible take on the prompt. I love the comparisons.
First of all it's a great photo for the prompt; a thousand words couldn't describe it better. 2nd, my brain did a total shift with cavorting like hay. Super.
I like this. Several of us have used walls metaphorically, but I like the fact that you used them literally!
lovely contrasting images here...
A nice bringing together and contrasting of images!
What an interesting juxtaposition of words/thoughts/ideas. Walls cavorting alone stopped me and made me think... then "like hay..." Hmmm. Very cool poem.
Like it! Like it! Well done, especially the wall cavorting like hay!
Any poem that has the word "maelstrom" in it is a winner in my book! It's just such an interesting word! I really liked this!
I'm glad Julie made the link for me. :-)
Dramatric contrast of hay and a bricks. A gulf of differences very difficult to bridge. Lovely.
Nathalie--
I really liked this haiku.
Like so many of the others, I was struck with the analogy between brick walls and hay cavorting.
Hay at play sways and leans in several directions, but usually has one preferred way (in my observations). I'm wondering if bricks have the same prediliction? And once they crumble, toward or away from each other, then what is the game?
I think it's the timelessness of the poem that strikes me. The endless play of matter on matter...
Thanks again--
Beth
This imparts an incredible feeling...love it!
A great image in the words, there.
i agree with the previous comment. quite striking how you linked hard and soft.
The image and imagery are magnificent. What a great take on the prompt.
will never look at timie and bricks the same way... cavorting like hay... changes everything that went before...
Very cool!
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