Sunday, December 28, 2008

Stardust




Glittering pebbles
Light fallen – lost – in my cup
Space zing on my tongue.

19 comments:

Jeeves said...

Space is what we decide, isnt it? Nice one.

anthonynorth said...

A tangy slant on the prompt. I liked it.

Anonymous said...

.."Light fallen – lost – in my cup
Space zing on my tongue"
_classical romanticism~in the language of now..beautiful-
..many thanks..

Anonymous said...

Looks like champagne. Liquid stardust!

SandyCarlson said...

Romantic, beautiful, and dreamy. Thanks.

Anonymous said...

Lovely images of stars come down to earth!

Beth P. said...

I'm going with fourwindshaiga--

this haikuis like liquid stardust!

Cheers!
Happy new year, Nathalie-

floreta said...

i like the visual accompaniment here!

sgreerpitt said...

the music is a great accompaniment to the poem and photo.

Raven said...

Love the photo and the light lost in my cup line. I like the idea of drinking in light.

Tash said...

Wonderful poem. & your photos are like poetry too.

Jim said...

You've got me wondering now what the space zing is like. It seems you composed this picture to match your verse. Thank you.
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Anonymous said...

Wonderful. It elevated me!

playing for pleasing the moon

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Tumblewords: said...

A clever use of the prompt - opens up a new world! Love it!

Linda Jacobs said...

I love how you used the word "zing"! Nice one!

Melody said...

I like the way my imagination soars with this little haiku, especially "space zing on my tongue" Nice job!

Patois42 said...

I will add to the chorus of ones who adore "space zing." Wonderful.

Anonymous said...

Yummy...
I want the space zing, too!

Anonymous said...

creative- dreamy and spicey
enjoy space-zing