Sunday, April 19, 2009

One word



One word might open
Your heart - that firmly locked door.
Rain drops rusted shut.

13 comments:

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

I know the feeling .. one word have reduced me to tears many time.

anthonynorth said...

I love the symbolism you've used in this.

Rachel Green said...

Beautiful!
I love such old doors.

SandyCarlson said...

The power of those drops of water! Gorgeous.

Geraldine said...

A perfect take on the prompt. Bravo!!!

Hugs, G

Anonymous said...

This one is good, and I too, love old doors.

Bruce Miller said...

Perfect.

Tumblewords: said...

Superb depth in this! Superb!!

qualcosa di bello said...

such balance!...one word may have closed that door & another will open it

Kilauea Poetry said...

This was perfect for my rainy day..nice one-

Beth P. said...

rusty old hinges anyhow...

Thanks for this--it is lovely!!

gabrielle said...

so much the heart can hold

lovely!

Anonymous said...

that's some long slow rusting!