Sunday, September 06, 2009

Romance


16 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

So very original. Love this.

I hold myself in the doorway

Greyscale Territory said...

A pledge and romance seem to be like opposites here! I wonder which is the dark side and which is the light? Creative, challenging poem!

Jim said...

Those old outside statues take a beating from the elements over time. The inside ones don't weather too well.
I have been trying to identify this one. I guessed Michaelangelo's Moses but it isn't. In a way it looks like Micaelangelo himself. :-)
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Leo said...

a beautiful poem.. saying lot in little! nice! :)

anthonynorth said...

So few words, but such a lot said.

Maggie said...

The lashes seem to have a haunting and longing look about them.

SandyCarlson said...

I wonder why the reticence.

I enjoyed this.

Vita Stunder said...

I really enjoyed this!

Anna

Sweetest in the Gale said...

A very intriguing take...I enjoyed this one!

Tammie Lee said...

'eyes that deny that last pledge' takes me to the land of memories...
so much said with the eyes...
the other two lines are wonderful as well.
Spirithelpers

Amias said...

huuummm.
This piece sent my mind drifting ... I love the line, "time kissing your skin", very original indeed!

Beth P. said...

you trickster!

loved this--

qualcosa di bello said...

the last line is one that will stay with me...

Tumblewords: said...

Provocative piece! Enjoyed it...

gabrielle said...

You must remember this. A kiss is just a kiss. A sigh is just a sigh
As time goes by.
enjoyed this.

DeLi said...

isnt this feeling, the best we have of life?

so nice!