Sunday, March 22, 2009

Equals


19 comments:

Jeeves said...

Really like this. There is a sad tinge to it.

anthonynorth said...

So much hidden behind the words here. Clever and intriguing.

Rachel Green said...

Very sad. I know the sentiment.

SandyCarlson said...

I know the feeling--the pain of thought, the pleasure of seeing, touching, smelling new blossoms. Ouch and wow.

Barb said...

First, I loved the haiku! And I love that you chose a ransom note font, declaring that your mind and heart will no longer be held hostage. Brilliant!

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

Wow! To stop the pain, you must stop thinking about him ... her.

I like..
"plum trees bloom once more"
.. it's like an old Japanese story. I so love your presentation!

Anonymous said...

Pain can often be fertile soil for a blossoming - beautifully done!

Beth P. said...

It's amazing how they stop blooming when we're consumed with pain...

Thank you for this, and glad the plum trees are back on the job, Nathalie--

Maggie said...

I am just starting to see the blooms in my yard once again.

qualcosa di bello said...

your words remind of me of great comfort in the seasons' cycles, something to hold onto in spite of the hurt

Tumblewords: said...

Exquisite work - the presentation is wonderful and the words feed so many layers. Love it.

Jacqueline Dove said...

First the presentation blew me away, and I loved the haiku, the sadness ending in hope.

Jim said...

Hi Nathalie, isn't it nice after a stormy time when the plum trees begin blooming again! It takes a while, most times longer than for the literal plum trees.
This is nice, thank you.
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Quiet Paths said...

Nicely done. The last line is truly well delivered.

Tash said...

I like how the words are suspended in the air...like they will just float or slide away. Beautiful done.

sgreerpitt said...

I like this so much, it makes me think and wonder -- are the thoughts brought on by the blooming of the plum trees? or are the trees a sign of moving on from the pain, letting the memories go? Lots to reflect upon.

Anonymous said...

Wonderful verse.

Anonymous said...

yr presentation is unequaled.. and the ku is subtle yet so powerful...

Patois42 said...

Every part of it is perfect: the words, the images, the entire package.