Sunday, January 11, 2009

Summer Day






















A summer day ghost
Lost in a dark labyrinth
Winter ice coffin.

23 comments:

Bruce Miller said...

clever clever - using the photo of intermeshed leaves as a clue: maybe the ghost is the space between the leaves; and at the same time, the space is also the dark labyrinth. And all of it is capped by the ice coffin - not shown here, in this, a sort of x-ray.

Anonymous said...

As kitehorse says, loved the effect created by the leaves..

golden freeze

Haiku Tuna said...

Leaves or ice crystals? A mysterious dark poem with a sunny title. Alluring!

Edward S Gault said...

"A Winter Ice Coffin"-That's certainly what it's like in Boston right now!I can't wait till Summer.
Excellent poem.

spacedlaw said...

Frost on my window actually. They are pretty leaves too. And flowers.

anthonynorth said...

Yes, summer's certainly wrapped up in a cold sheet at present.

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

You couldn't have mated this better ... visual/mental images ... darkness used in such a sweet way.

SandyCarlson said...

Winter has that effect. I noticed yesterday when I was out walking in it that so much of frozen is just entombed in the air. It's amazing. Somehow the seasons coalesce in these images.

Barb said...

Your photo is mesmerizing! It is difficult to discern whether they are leaves or ice crystals. Very well done. I confess, it makes me all the gladder that I no longer live in New England!

Anonymous said...

The best of both seasons. Lovely.

Quiet Paths said...

Very nice; I know many see winter as a kind of death...

Anonymous said...

..since summer is such a lovely season the ghost ought to be friendly too-perhaps no exorcisms required-
but can't forget to mention that really liked ur other poem @ kitehorse-

"Melody drowned
Tap tap of water bonga
Clouds dwindle and go"
-for both of these ..many thanks..

Anonymous said...

Winter haunted by summer-- wonderful!

Anonymous said...

Wonderful description! That's what it felt like in the storm we had last night - big drifts like a coffin of ice/snow. Great imagery!

qualcosa di bello said...

we're not iced in here in coastal north carolina, but why does winter feel like a coffin on some days??

floreta said...

the text is hard to read in the photo but i think this is appropriate given it's about a lost ghost. i like the last line: winter ice coffin.

Beth P. said...

interesting poem--
I am supposing that the summer ghost will find it's way out of the labyrinth as the icy coffin melts...so, we can breathe easier, it will be summer again!

Thanks--

Tumblewords: said...

Great: ghost of summer - perfect haiga!

Maggie said...

Brrrrrr...where have all the flowers gone.
Indeed, I always sort of dread seeing the dying of the green leaves of summer as winter comes in with a blast of cold air which blows the dried leaves to the ground until a new birth in the spring.
You really nailed this cold coffin well.

Anonymous said...

Lovely image--summer day ghost.

Patois42 said...

That photo is fabulous. What an inspiraion. I love the haiku, in a chilling way, that is.

Marjorie said...

I love the photo, and the poem, and the way the two complement each other.

Anonymous said...

who would have thought of summer day ghost lost in winter.. excellent....